Linkedin Feedback with

This session is designed to help you optimize your LinkedIn profile for professional networking and career advancement. In this session, a mentor with expertise in online branding and career development will review your existing LinkedIn profile, provide feedback and guidance, and offer best practices for improving your online presence.

Throughout the session, the mentor will work collaboratively with you to identify areas of strength and weakness in your LinkedIn profile and develop a strategy for improvement. This may include advice on how to use multimedia, such as photos and videos, to enhance the profile, as well as guidance on how to engage with other LinkedIn users through commenting, messaging, and participating in industry groups.

As a hiring manager with decades of experience having hired 100's of candidates and interviewed even more, I'm happy to provide detailed LinkedIn Profile review and feedback.

A good place to start is to follow the XYZ resume format.

In one sentence, it includes what you've accomplished (X) + the qualitative results (Y) + the skills or experience you utilized to achieve the outcome (Z).

E.g.
At UpOut reduced CAC (Customer Acquisition Cost) from $300 to $30 by running 100's of experiments to maximize targeting and conversion rate.

I also recommend having a clear headline, changing your settings to make sure you are the most visible, having some content that you have interacted with and ideally some recommendations.